That was a pretty good first episode, i like the character design for the main elf character he was pretty creepy looking which suites into the whole style you are going for. I didn't know where you were heading when you introduced the fluffy character but its cool that you have chosen to keep it around as a sort of sidekick. The voice acting was good but what let you down was the transfer which was alittle hard to understand, i think the flash would have benefited from some subtitles. The background you used suited in nicely as well. Overall i was pretty pleased with the flash.