pretty good
im seeing the improvements..
lip synch and environment graphics need to be worked on..thats all
Author Comments
This is slowly but surely progressing. I finally have all of the voices for my episode 6 characters. Hopefully people are enjoying the story. And again, if you want to see the unvoiced episodes 7-25, they can be found at the lifepoint1.com guest animation section.
Hey Bishop!
It's Bandit, just want to say great work. No one in this business works harder than you! Keep going man!
ok
graphics were nice but animating needs more work.
Odd character interaction...
The actions and reactions of the characters in the story were kinda strange. Like the guy who showed up because he "wanted to be where the action was", and then some girl was asking him questions like nothing dramatic (the fight) was even happening. And the two girl's being tied together by the sleeves of one of them seemed a pretty weak action to have been taken by some one with super-powers. It doesn't take super-powers to tear out of a stupid sweater. Also, I'm not exactly clear on why some big-name, secretive corporation would be interseted in acquiring a tattoo parlor. And that they would be so interested they would be willing to kill its owner? Very strange indeed. And not the mysterious sort of strange that leaves you awaiting conclusion to an amount of suspense... more like a "sure thing, whatever you say" sort of strange, that leaves you walking away and not returning the strange party's phone-calls.
The drawing and animation weren't too bad. Kinda stiff, and there were a few spots where the drawing seemed really mediocre. Like when the girls ecscape in a big blue column with yellow squiggles in it... what I guessed was suposed to be water... among a few other effects. And some of the girls looked like guys when side views of their face were what was shown.
Bishop-Supreme responds:
I would like to respond to you, since you're the only one with some constructive criticism about my animation and story.
Ok let's see... Relics's motives in joining Alyson should become more clear later on.
Caitlin asks the questions because she is more interested in why these people are fighting... than the actual fight... but apparently, Relics isn't.
The sleeves thing... well it took that power (which I won't say what it is) to tie them up without the sisters knowing it. It just took Megan a good amount of time to free her hands from the knot. They didn’t tear out of it, Megan was just working on untying the knot.. no superpowers involved in that.
The corporation is interested in acquiring everything. The actual murder of Nola (which happened in episode 1) was really only an accident.
And the drawing and animation, like I've said before... this is an old animation (I completed it about a year ago.. and I believe it is really the 8th complete animation I've ever done in my life.), but there will be definite improvements as I go along.
See you on the front page!
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