Ok for a first animation

This is an ok animation, you have ability. Though this is a rip from madness and I felt like the song didn't fit the situation. Nice job though.

Omg.

Total steal of madness, you dont deserve to breath anymore.

sorry dude this needs alot of work...

This was a very choppy, frustrating to watch cartoon. It had no story line and had slow violence and movement. Your style wasn't that original aswell, you practicly stole madness and made faces on the main characters. This was low quality work.
It just needs some improvement in movement, maybe have characters speak, and try to work on the choppyness. Also try not to use what other people have done before, like madness, and it will be a much much better cartoon.