good, but i wanna see more, man :)
this was good, i loved the story line, and i REALIZE that animating, is HARD AS HELL
with that in mind, i say this was a great opening to the series.
keep up the good work, dude
-Agent 47
Author Comments
Well ill put it like this, I havent finished yet Hense the 1.1. But i wont be here for a long while because of my personal life so i wanted this to come out until i can make the 2nd part for others to enjoy.
If it makes no sence at all then Ok good because it will all be explained in due time, This is only a lil taster of the world of the Unknown.
Enjoy
Lacking Style and Imagination.
This feels like any other poorly imagined horror themed anything. The author shows little understanding of flash mechanics.
needs a little work, but still good.
The storyline was interesting and well written, but you might want to work on the animation a bit, especially with the character's arms. overall though, It wasn't bad.
JakeX responds:
Oh its the arms :D well....what can i say i was a lazy bastard at that time, haha know what i mean?
Nah i created this about 1 and half years ago and just started up again....from about scene 5 and onwards i was on flash 8 doing well haha
thanks again
not bad
the animation wasnt great but it wasnt bad at all so thats good (that sentance is slightly confusing....) good sound so overall it was a good flash. 4/5. im just hoping that sometime in the near future you will make the other half of it, i like the story so far
JakeX responds:
Ohhh thanks Mate, I really appreshiate the review and your kind comments :D
Yeah when i have time and well better graphics ill be back to make the other half, Thanks again :D
funny
I was laughing when they were talking. The way their arms moved was so unnatural and ridiculous. Nice plot though.
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