You've got your facts wrong
Oxygen by itself is not flammable.If you mix it with something that is burning it will act as an accelerant but it won't burn by itself.
Besides that you've got a great spiel here especially with the Lego dudes.I would have liked to see them animated though.That would have made this flash a keeper.You must have worked awhile on the script as the vo was pretty good if a bit quiet sometimes.
As for the oxygen not burning, trust me.I work with shit like this all the time.