ehhh

Nice buildup, but this was not a very effective trailer, the story looked like it might have turned out to be interesting though, but more effort would be needed on the trailer in terms of length, a title screen, and possibly a release date.

pretty bad

Even considering that this is a trailer, this was pretty bad work. You didn't tell us *anything* about the movie; the few scenes that you showed didn't excite the viewer in the least or encourage any interest in the film whatsoever. What's the point of showing us a rainstorm and a person, and nothing more?

I'm assuming it's safe to say that this movie will never come out, since it's been years since you made this, so I guess your trailer didn't interest you, either.

Eh? Is that it?

You shouldn't have submitted this as it isn't the finished version and I feel that demos/trailers/previews/unfinished work don't deserve to be submitted to Newgrounds as they are not the finished version, you should wait until you finish something before deciding to submit it.

Demo/Trailer/Preview/Unfinished Work rant over.

Even for a trailer that was poor, it's raining, there's some text, then a woman appears and she fires a gun, THE END. That really was just completely pointless, nothing happened at all, if you were going to bother with a trailer you should have at least had something happening in it, as this was just completely eventless. The rain effects were very poorly done too, you shuld ahve used lots of little diagonal lines moving diagonally down the screen, rather than big diagonal lines moving left and right across the screen.

Congratulations on managing to achieve what surely is the lowest scoring Daily Feature, this has currently got 1.24 for it's score, I think the lowest I've seen before was at least 2.something.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

That was freaking cool

The lightning effect was some of the best I've seen. Very real feeling. I don't think it deserved 1st place, but I also don't think it deserved a 1.19 score. Very cool, its just too bad the real movie was never made...

really not bad

but instead of what they said by geting the rain out the way. cut the lines. so that it looks like there actually moving downwards. instead of one long line