Lots of protential
If you keep at this, get some better audio recordings, and unlimited time you can make some really nice flash movies.
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A 30-second Flash project I did for my university. The only thing I really didn't like about it was the abrupt ending; didn't have a female voice actor so I just... blacked the whole thing out at the end.
If I *did* have a female VA though, would've shown a little extra. Oh well.
Nice
Short, but really good, like you said, you just need a voice actress to make it longer and it could be really great.
If you find one can you do another one of these, please?
Not bad...
You definitely have some talent. Now you just need to make some longer stuff.
It wasn't bad.
Just more story to it, it seemed ok otherwise.
Nice Short
Great animating. It wasn't the best I've seen, but I'm sure it took much effort.
Overall, it was ok.
I can't put much more input, since it was a lil short, so GR3AT!