I disagree

I think that this is a good start. Everything was good except for the chat speak...I hate that stuff. As for the no voice thing, I am probably not going to have voices in my upcoming flashes so I know where you are coming from. The sound was rather boring and at times the flash seemed to drag on for no reason, but don't get me wrong, I have tried to make flashes and I know how hard it is if you're inexperienced. The joke at the end was on the verge of almost to cheap, but I still giggled. I look forward to your upcoming series.

Bleh

This flash is not good at all. The audio has a blank spots, there is no speech, the text in place of the speech is in chat speak and doesn't even have a speech bubble, the story is unoriginal and graphics minimal.

Please take the time to put at least a reasonable effort into future works.

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Just...rubbish.
One of the things that makes a good flash movie are voice overs, i don't think i speak for myself when i say that we really don't want to read if it can be turned into sound (in this case, voice overs).

And also, if you're not going to include voice overs, at least try and get your spelling correct.

please make it faster, god

dude, i dont know if its your computer or not but that was fucking slow, and please add voice overs, it might sound like im flaming you, but if you accually read it it will help you

Fine, but please refine

If it were to have voice overs in it I would have voted atleast 3, but it didn't so I only voted 2. Your humor is good and needs no work. :) Good job, keep up the good humor. (XD)