Too short and too fast
You shouldn't have submitted this as it isn't the finished version and I feel that demos/trailers/previews/unfinished work don't deserve to be submitted to Newgrounds as they are not the finished version, you should wait until you finish something before deciding to submit it.
Demo/Trailer/Preview/Unfinished Work rant over.
It moved too fast, you only saw some of the action for a brief second, it wasn't long enough for you to really make anything out and it was impossible to fully look at what was going on, but from what I saw it was just a same old, same old storyless, pointless violence stick movie, which just made making a preview to it even more pointless as you know exactly what to expect from a storyless, pointless violence stick movie, as each one is essentially the same submission. This didn't even have any sound to it, it really needed some as it just seemed really odd to be watching this without sound. You really should have made the scenes involving the sticks in this movie longer so that you could make out what it was that was happening properly.
Peace Out, Afro Stud