Not bad, but could be a lot better...

Okay, first off, this is not a bad game. The graphics and controls are a lot better than the first one. The little storyline you added in there was clever and cute. And then of course Geno, which is just awesome on it's own.

However, level 7 is where the problems come around. There were several times where I jumped and fell through the platform, even though I had landed on it fairly evenly. That gets a little annoying after awhile, especially since you're sent all the way back to level 5. Then, when I finally managed to get through level 7, I couldn't get the star. However seeing as this was a demo I just assumed that was just the end of it, so I'm not going to grade you for that. Also, there were a lot of spelling mistakes in the texts, but this (of course) didn't affect the gameplay and isn't really too big of a deal.

Honestly, I don't want to critique you too much as I don't make games and I don't know how hard it is to create one. It does look like you put a lot of work into it and I think you deserve a score higher than what you have. I hope that you complete this game and submit it soon. I look forward to playing the completed version. :)

bad level 7

evry time i get to the star here it sends me back please fix this

not the best

this game is not the best but yet again one of the games i miss from nintendo i agree with the other guy who said u should put better boundries on this game and mabye some back ground music that is an acaul song but other than that good job and keep them coming

Needs Work...

A lot has already been said about this... I only have a couple things to add. My biggest complaint is that there aren't very good boundaries on this. If you put better boundaries on the walls and objects you need to jump on that would make this infinitely better. Jumping threw things is gay. Add walls that are solid. And for the love of so make the levels longer. I'm sure all this has been said before and much much more so good luck.

not bad for a demo

It needs a lot of work though. The jump detection system needs the most work. Mario cant defeat enemies by jumping on their heads, change that. WOW, the jumping sound is annoying... when you die, don't make us start at the previous level, just start from the beginning of the screen, cause i died on the first castle level, and i had to see the speaking scene again, which i may add, you cant skip.