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comments please, should i finish it.
not bad!
you did it good!
awesome
this wuz totaly awesome but how did rock lee face change from red ( 8 inner gates) to normal?
Even though it just a test....
...everything happens way too early. Naruto goes fox chakra in the beginning and goes back too normal just after that. BIG NO NO. Anyway when you make the real thing stretch it out.
this is just a good test!
if it was real then i proable give it a, but its just a test so a five goes yay ^_^ and promsie me you'll work on does dissapearing thing k *giggles*