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So...I think i have done a good job. It is my best animation for now. It is I think 1 and half minutes long.
Please vote fairly. Watch it to the end. It isn´t so long.
So about the Flash: It is made by me, Emi-Killer. (14 years old)
And a demon killed a psycho stick.^^ Then a hero goes in a house where...ok It doesn´t have a really good story. maybe i will continue it. Just watch it.

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ok so...

LP FTW and it was ok little boring and it didnt go into any detail.... but decent animation and i liked the music so im gonna give u a 6/10



off track

it was good a little confusing and the sound was a little out of tune...but other than that good job!



not bad, kinda short but not bad.

I really don't much to say but that I have no idea what was goind on and that you had the emo songs from Linkin Park.


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woohay

I can see you had a something good in mind, but you lost track of it along the way.
ur way of draging is very good.
Choosing Linkin Park for music sold me without a doubt :) since i'm quite the fan of them, but that doesn't matter (much :p )
I'd say just try again and continue to grow in your skill in storymaking :p
try to make a story and keep in on the same line. like in here you could show the demon a bit more, make them fight because now it's like SLASH, dead, without them knowing it was coming


Emi-Killer responds:

yea i see...^^ DAMN MY STORY^^


Meh

The flash overall animation, and appearence wise was good. But it just get's done and my first thought was "Uhhhhh. . . what?" Obviously you had somthing in mind that was going on here, but with nothing to convay a story. It just seem's like a bunch of broken thought's. Mabee a Pre-lude flash, one leading up to this one, and that would clear thing's up. Add some talking, even if it's just text box's, it would add some depth to the flash. As well as some sound FX other than the background music. Overall it wasn't a bad flash just completly pointless with room for improvment.


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2,137
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250
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2.84 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 15, 2007
6:08 AM EDT
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