goood

improving from your last flash make more try and improve i wish you good fortune

Keep improving

It needs more animation and sound effects should be cool, voice acting is well executed, also its short and the joke isnt so good :/

With a little editing this could be great!

OK so there is a good idea here. But I see the problem. Since the animation was crude, the ending might be too. Now if a LOT more was to the ending this would be a shit ton funnier (a shit ton being a little over a metric ton). So just improve on that and re-submit.