Not bad I suppose...
I take it from the voices that you are a kid, so i'll give you credit for that, Keep going with flash and you could have sumthin good one day. Keep it up! [__<><___><>__] (Ha Ha ... Fish tank..)
improving from your last flash make more try and improve i wish you good fortune
It needs more animation and sound effects should be cool, voice acting is well executed, also its short and the joke isnt so good :/
With a little editing this could be great!
OK so there is a good idea here. But I see the problem. Since the animation was crude, the ending might be too. Now if a LOT more was to the ending this would be a shit ton funnier (a shit ton being a little over a metric ton). So just improve on that and re-submit.