It's alright...
It was a bit slow at parts, try fixing that.
[I RECOMMEND YOU WATCH IN LOW QUALITY] This will make much more sense if you have read the book. I earlier submitted the intro alone but I have finished it. This is my Third flash and first time lipsynching and recording my voice. I am fully aware of how lacking it is in those departments. Any tips or comments would be greatly appreciated! thx gang!
It's alright...
It was a bit slow at parts, try fixing that.
wut did u mean by that? wuts slow?