Haha!
Great for a first flash! It was pretty good even not for a first flash! I really liked the humor in Dark, you get on my favorite author's list for that!
Author Comments
I'm new to this hole Flash "dealey", tryin to teach myself, with the help of this legendary site and its legendary members of course. This flash is notin special but it makes me smile. So I though it was worth submitting. Enjoy, the first half is about a stupid little robot, and the second, my tribute to the Tankmen collection.(there some stylish flashes, not mine...theirs.) Lookin for some constructive criticism. TY! Should I even bother improving them...?
I like the ending
Not bad it was short but good.
Grumbles responds:
Thank you.
Decent Job
Review for the first flash:
I think that you should either use voices or no dialogue at all. I would prefer voices for this movie, because the dialogue cannot speak for itself.
Second flash:
This one lost my attention very quickly. Too little action. It's "Tank Man". He needs to be dancing from bullet fire or something like that. Needs a little more imagination.
Good luck on future flashes,
quidnunct
Grumbles responds:
okay, thnx. But u see I have a pretty thick irish accent, so i'm not sure if any one would understand what the hell i'm sayin.(an I dont have a mic) But I no what you mean.