part 1 was cooler
the flash was good but the part 1 was better than this i think you should add more zombies and a damsel in distress in part 3.
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This is the 2nd Episode of ninjablock! yay! =3 if us havent seen part one yet, please watch it first, only then you will know the whole story!
Listen..
I gave you a protection point because you got alot of potential. Just practice and you´ll get alot better. It isn´t easy to make great flashs like Animator VS. Animation and On Your Mark. You have to put effort into it.
The goods:
-You got a good style
The bads:
-The blood was pretty lame
-Everything happened so slow. Try to make it look like the ninja got a move every single second.
-The opponents didn´t move. They did just stand there. Make them fight and move around.
-I hated the background music. Use some better fight music from Newgrounds.
-The graphics wasn´t too good.
That´s all. Please don´t give up!
//Xipp
Holydrainer responds:
~Okay.. But why you say you have an good style and you have under your review style: 1?
Good...
It was good, nice style but my only problem(s) is/are that no one fought back o_0 I expected a huge fight but no one fought back (sure one did) you can't make him invincible like God he has to get hurt
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