Jerry is another character I've decided to torture in my animations. Actually why should I take the blame, he did it to himself. I took a lot of time to animate this one, and if you have seen my past submissions, you'll see how they have evolved.
GREAT!
3.44 is a good score but I think you deserve a 3.90 for this because it was great! It was one of the most original flashes I've seen in a while. Really great job dude.
Graphics were stylish and very nicely drawn; not to mention the animation was flawless and smooth. Great job.
~thebeagle
P.S.: Crit my "Dave the Hungry Dinosaur" for me?
good one
that was a pretty cool animation. a rather weird idea to it overall, but the graphics were pretty nice, good audio and it was pretty cool to watch.
It's nice to have been reviewed by the #2 reviewer on NewGrounds. Thank you.
"what will the neighbors think"
whether you intended to be a social commentary or odd story (both) I loved the story line. His unatural obession with keeping the lawn pristine and having a good outward apperance. The narrator bit at the beginning set the mood for the flash. I wonder, what sparked the idea of purple fingers replacing grass?
Fitting voice over. Well done flash
Very Cool Take
I'll give you two thumbs up on that one (please don't cut them off).
It's a cool story and though I'm not the biggest fan of the style used at times, it fit with the story and the whole feel of the Flash.
I did wonder what that yellow line was at the end with the cop. If it was the yellow line in the road, it went into the grass.
But, very nice job overall as it's a good movie.
It was a police marked off zone...Such as in when a murder or death takes place in a public area, police mark it off with yellow tape.
I enjoy seeing you like the animation aside from your preferences.
Hell yeah,
By far, one of the coolest flash movies I've seen in a while. I'm a huge David Firth fan...and now a huge fan of yours. Awesome.