But there is room for improvement. One; you made the snow by just looping a random-move around of it, right? Check out some tutorials, they'll help you make random snow. Two; make it more fps, made my eyes hurt a little. Three: Cooming? You didn't fix that in the title, the first few seconds, or the last part... -_- it bothers me. But, other than that, if you're really making a movie out of this it will be great. 3/5
This is very much a case of style over substance, but I like it. You've created a wonderful atmosphere, but there's very little pertaining to your upcoming story. Also the misspelling of the word 'coming' bothered me a bit.
But still, cracking effort.
it s'ok, but...
It's way too slowwwwwwwwww! But the sound is good and the graphics are great, so keep making them and things will go fine. but you might want to keep the last words on the screen for style reasons.
Decent graphics.. Yeah, that's about all I can say about it. I don't get the meaning by submitting this, there really is nothing to make a review about so it can't be for the feedback? There isn't a title(unless it's name is 'Cooming soon'), you don't reveal any of the story.. Basically we have no idea what's going on. Use NG Alphas for stuff like this, and come back when you have something to show.
It looks good...
Your graphics and animation are good, if albeit slow at some points - but what is the purpose of the flash? As a "coming soon" one it shows little other than a man walking / hiking / climbing across snow... doesn't really generate interest.