Pretty good
But there is room for improvement. One; you made the snow by just looping a random-move around of it, right? Check out some tutorials, they'll help you make random snow. Two; make it more fps, made my eyes hurt a little. Three: Cooming? You didn't fix that in the title, the first few seconds, or the last part... -_- it bothers me. But, other than that, if you're really making a movie out of this it will be great. 3/5