It's a Comic

Entertaining. Although I'm sure most Newgrounds members can't read, so....

I did not enjoy it.

Thank you for your effort good sir.

Thoroughly Entertained

I am amazed. The art was fantastic, so nice choice on that. I really was kept on the edge of my seat as I read it. A part of me felt a bit scared, maybe just being a male seeing a truly vengeful side of a woman.
The characters are amazing though. They are nearly exact oposites, and that is what makes it interesting. Only thirteen pages and I was totally enthralled by a sense of horrified intrest. Sorry to keep goign on... I sincerely hope to see more of this.

Nicely detailled

I think that you could certainly do with adding a little colour to the proceedings - it would be like Sin City, with making the blood stand out, for example. I think that the drawing style is excellent and even the occasional regressions (Yaoi?) frames that look a little simplistic with the art are well placed for the effect.

It's not a bad plot and the characters are certainly there for the pervert vote in the audience :P I think that developing these characters would be a wonderful thing.

The covers were nice and I think that perhaps some sort of 'centrefold' where you see a wonderfully animate picture of the girls doing something like when Veronica ran the guy over in the car - do that like the cover art in full colour and you'll have a great impact, before continuing the story to a triumphant conclusion.

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id love to see more

great writer and very good with the quips. like someone said before me... "I'd be your stalker." .....if you would let me?