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It Burns My Eyes 1

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A new dramatic drama series, staring Saw's Jigsam, 300's King Leonidas, Batman, Arnold of Hey Arnold, Darth Vader, and Pokemon's Ash. On this episode the gang gets into a fight, and Arnold lays down some heavy news!

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LULZ

GAY

Not bad

I liked this, made me laugh. It was a little short though, which was disapointing. Also the voices could use a little work, not too much though, don't make it sound like you're trying too hard as people often do. Graphics were decent, each character looked like the original. Decent job all around, I'll be looking for the next episode. See if you can't make em a bit longer though. Good stuff.

Short but funny. CONTAINS EFFORT!

Graphics: This guy used an unusual style not often seen on Newgrounds... it's hard to describe, but here goes... he makes pictures... of people... that have details... and somewhat look like real people. The english language needs a word for "not retarded stick figures." Well, whaetver that word is, it applies here.

Style: The drawing style was good, as noted above, the guy actually tried to make his pictures look like something. Good for him! The show format, on the other hand, could use a bit more work. Mostly just make it longer, and try harder in the writing department.

Sound: Voices were okay. A little too much breathing into the microphone, there. Also, you could try downloading Audacity and using it to adjust your voice's pitch a bit for different characters.
The music was dull, which fit the sitcom theme perfectly, but at least it was easy to ignore. Way to not use the most annoying music ever on purpose, which is what most Newgrounds authors do. "Young kid trying to sound like a bunch of different movie characters syndrome" hurt suspense-of-disbelief pretty badly, but not enough to tank the movie.

Violence: Severed leg. Meh.

Humor: Heh. Made me laugh in a few places. I probably scored this as being funnier than it actually is, just because it's "actually has jokes in it funny" as opposed to "so bad it's funny." Man, I keep scoring this movie as "good" relative to all the shit on Newgrounds. Comedic timing was pretty good.

Overall: I wonder what kinda scores I'd be giving it if I were reviewing it purely on its own merits? Probably best not to think about it. This made me smile, and it actually required effort. Way to go, kid. Looking forward to more of your work, but maybe not this series. Not unless it blossoms unexpectedly into something MUCH more elaborate than a conversation made entirely out of movie quotes.

Looking forward to it.

I smell a reality show! Where random cartoon characters learn to live together in the same house. Oh wait there's already one. It's called "Drawn Together". Darn!

not bad

nice. but u should make it longer with better sound, i'll be looking forward to more ^_^

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Apr 9, 2007
5:41 PM EDT