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Note: I have to use this for a school project, so that why it's short.
So i submitted this about a month ago, and you people gave me stuff to work on because i asked for it. This is what i did
I changed the artwork (still sucks, i tried this time tho)
I added voice ( this is the frist time i've had voice in my flash so the mouth syncing might be a little off)
I added credits and a replay button.
Please tell me what still needs work...
Haha!!
THIS IS A GREAT VIDEO!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THIS MOVIE!! LOL!
BY THE WAY THIS IS NICK K.
wow
for your frist one it was pretty good, i do agree with some people on the elbow thing.
remember practice makes perfect!
K
^^Good Points^^
I think the best part about this movie was how you made it a spoof of Snakes on a Plane, which I didn't see coming until you actually said something about it. The graphics weren't bad, but some obvious problems. I liked the voice overs as well.
^^Needs Improving^^
Some elbow and shoulder animation issues, which could be easily changed in a short amount of time.
yogurt
The numbers I gave don't mean anything, they're just a hassle to take seriously. Anyway, the art is a little fishy, not the style itself but the lines don't always match up and the obvious shoulder issue, unless you intended for that to happen. Honestly, it wasn't terrible, not even bad. I'd go so far as to say it was funny, but don't quote me on that. You don't have my legal consent. The phrase "Snakes on a Plane" gets me every time. I don't care if I'm watching the worst show on television, if they make a reference to that movie, they win. You win, sirs.
