My two cents
I loved it! hahaha, It was amazingly 'dramatic'. Keep it up dude!!~
Author Comments
So basically, my friend gave me Flash and I mucked around in it for 2 days. This is the result.
**EDIT** I made the title (slightly) nicer, made it so the music doesn't end when the credits start, it ends when either a) the track ends, or b) when you click replay
Napalmed responds:
Thanks :D
Good first
It was a good first shot. Pick up some tutorials and you could go far.
Napalmed responds:
Thanks for the review and advice =)
Brown house
This was indeed a fun little experiment. Realistically I was actually hoping for more randomness, but if you only got 2 hours...you only got 2 hours. But fine job ye did
Napalmed responds:
Thanks =) Sorry it isnt random enough for ya =p
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I'm glad you've been experimenting with flash,
but personally it's something I wouldn't have submitted onto NG. Maybe just put it in an online portfolio to build on, maybe.
For two days, it was quite good.
Hopefully now you can use the skills you've learned to build proper animations with proper storylines.
-Mesmic.
Napalmed responds:
Thanks for the compliment, and I will try and make a half-decent animation now =p. Maybe you're right about submitting it to NG, but I wanted to see if people thought it was any good.
a agree with the guy above this review
this was better than my first flash graphics ok audio great fitted the animation good work dude hope to see your animations even better in the future!
~matt2k7
Napalmed responds:
Cheers :)
