Well me and my friends worked hard on this. We had a better version in my opinion but my comp crashed before we saved it. Anyways this is my first flash that I made. Completely by myself. The series after this promises better graphics, comedy, adventure, and horrible peanut butter monsters, The Flood...
eeehhhhh... not so good
not to sound like a total halo nerd, but i dont see any potential for a story. remember, halo 3 is supposed to take place directly after halo 2. halo 2.5 has no reason for evenbeing there. animations are not too bad, but the rest sucked. better luck next time
Not much
It may just be a trailer, but it doesn't have alot of potential. You could've done better on it.
wasn't that bad....
but then it wasn't that good....it was alright but you could work on more things.....
Well..
Your graphics really aren't too bad, but there are some areas you can easily fix. For example, don't use plain white circles as stars. Try checking out radial fades in Flash. And the fire: instead of just having the two frames moving every second, make a few more frames, and have them going faster.
This probably won't get through the portal, but don't let that get you down. Improve on little things like I said, and continue on with this idea. Also, try a faster frame rate. 20-25 ain't a bad idea. You may have to work more, but it'll be a lot more smoother. :)
Yea. But I promise in the series it will be better. But we'll just have to wait and find out. This was a 4 day flash I made after files went down. Im planning on taking 4 weeks this time to make every little detail perfect. Also I'll take your advice.
Game Over...Try Again
Dam...where to start? It was slow. I mean really, really, reeeaaalllyyy sloooooooow. Speed it up a little and it will be easier to watch. Work on animating this animation. There was way too much tweening and still images. One question, were those white dots stars? I didn't know stars were all the same diameter. The funniest part was the little skit at the end. Try it again... -C
Bud it was my first flash...