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I added some sound effects and some background music , i didn't have many sound files so all u'll hear is the music and the sticks screaming every time they die

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:-/

Did you get this idea from watching one of the crappy Resident Evil movies?

What?

Just a dumb movie. No sound, almost had bad 3d effects. instead, they were just terrible. I hate stringy blood effects. sorry.

Erm..... boring

First off... I think it shouldn't have been stick and completely soundless, so listen to my advice.
1: Try practicing drawing humans, not stickmen, and make their color normal.
2: Put some audio in it! I don't like a Soundless movie until the Credits! Also, put some voices in.
3: Use a kinda Matrix style of movement when they pass the Lasers. Don't make it so fast!
4: Make an intro, not skip to the Laser dodging. Maybe what happened when they discovered the laser and tried to dodge it!

Well, use this advice for the next flash! Have a good one.

You're good at the 3D program...

...But not that great at flash. The big 3d environment and lasers looked cool, and reminded me of parts like that in the Resident Evil games and movies. However, the sticks, especially up close, looked pretty bad. Also, you need to get a preloader so the flash file can load all the way - the song didn't come in until the animation was pretty much over. Having it run through would have been nicer.
Anyway, you have good 3d skills that could make something good - you just need to work on flash skills now.

Hmmmm...

Yeah, you're pretty good (not great by any means), but it's nothing without audio or a plot of some sort.

In the future, even if you get good, don't say that you are. It will only bring you hostility from people.

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Apr 1, 2007
9:09 PM EDT