Well, you're good at static art...
...and perspective, and that stuff, but the animation was a bit.... well, ok, experimental.
The robots just kinda skated along the floor, didn't really lift their legs...
But the overall art does look impressive. I suggest you practice the actual animating some more, and then you could blow us all over with a brilliant flash.
And maybe speed it up a bit... ever watched action films? Bam! action, more action etc...
This was a bit... dull. :/
And maybe also anothre suggestion would be checking some more about physics?
A heavy robot like that could never land so lighty o_0'
I hope this helps.
Physics?! Are you mental?!
For one thing, how the HELL do you know that the robot's even freakin heavy? I'd like to know how you figured that one out. For one thing, the damn bot's not even that big...I intended it to be only 2-3 feet tall at the most.
Lastly, I apologize if you thought it was "dull". Next time I'll make sure something blows up or gets killed every 5 seconds.
Now please, go back to watching your hentai and sprite movies.
Failed to keep my attention
maybe it's just me but that was really boring
I dont know what it was, but the music was bumpin! the flash was a little too slow for me, and I actually found my self not even watching and just listening to the mu"sick". Could have used more action I think, it was funny though when the robot fell, didnt see it coming haha. good job!
For the most part...
pretty good. Graphics, visual FX, and music were strong. My biggest issues was a lot of repetition in the background. I'd also like some sound fx included. Keep it up.
Ignore what that last review said. Boo fucking hoo...no sound FX. I don't think this movie needs them. The song, whatever it is, fit the movie nicely. Had sort of a robotic/militaristic vibe to it. (what is that song btw?)
Very very nicely done animation wise, especially at the start and end where it went from full color to wire frame. And the nice touch at the start and end where the intro and credits looked like computer code were good as well. Pretty solid piece of work here.
Yeah, I thought sound effects would really...cheapen the movie. What the hell would I put? Clanking sounds for the robot walking? Lame-ass zap noises for the laser beams? Stupid over-used explosion sounds that EVERYONE uses because you can download it free from flashkit? Oh I know! The "open-door" sound from AIM! Honestly, screw that shit.
Anywho, the music is from the game Descent 3...level 8, I believe. The whole game has damn good music.
Well, this was long enough. Thanks for the review, man.