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Needs more action

If you use a song like that with no movement it doesn't turn well. He should've jump the kid or something, and the change of clothes doesn't really make sence, nor does the chnage of eye color at the end. I think red and green make orange or something, but that was yellow. But if you use a taffic light in the trems then i DO get it. Green good, Yellow waring, red ...well..ya' know. Movement on your grapics. Make the background more real ,and animation the people when they move ,instead of fliping the image.

It's geart concept, tho. BIG UPS ,ON THAT!

great job

this move was great, hard to understand but great!

very well done my friend, the story is well done

i enjoyed the music and the fact that you went along and actualy made a plot line of a story to a song like that is not easy...good job!
i especialy enjayed the fact that you would go into the plashbacks of (i believe his sister or him) when he was younger... again good job!...

things to watchout for in te future is the horovontal tearing and also make sure that none of your caracters all of a sudden pop of the bottom of the page with no legs or body to seak of... i think you know what i am talking about, but very well done, i have been trying to put together a sort os story like that of my own and once it is done and if it is acsepted i will put your name under the special thanks, you gave me some very good ideas

i hope to see more movies from you and i know that they will only get better...

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Good Job

Good job on this flash. The animation was good but need a little work mostly in the back grounds and the smoothness.