VINCENT, YOU MORON!

I have to criticize you, I just have to! Okay, #1. Great idea of incorporating Jack Trigger into an Animation, but your timing for the voice and their mouths was TERRIBLE! no offense. #2. At the final fight scene, NOT THE BEST CHOICE OF MUSIC! HELLO!? This is the friggin' 1930s! Rock was not even heard of until at least the 60s. #3. The voice for Trigger was fine, but I would've had no problem to do some voices. You heard my German accent. I could've helped. finally, #4. Try making movement seem a little more realistic. Please don't take this too harshly. Remember what you said in school. "Constructive Criticism"

C u in school.

Ethan

Decent...

The only thing wrong really was that the sound gradually came out faster than the lips were moving, and by the end, the sound came out at least 3 seconds before the lips moved. I don't really know how to fix that though, sry.

Meh

The artwork was very good considering it was done with a mouse, id have gone crazy making this. The mouse artwork also brings its own uniqueness in artwork that is unlike some of the other good flashes on the site. But the sound needs some work. Maybe consider asking a friend with a deeper voice to help you? 5

Dug the style

You have the noir look down pretty well, down to environments and dialogue. The art is alright, but the sound quality is pretty bad. Also, the voices sound a bit young, at least for gritty, smoking private eyes.
A good effort either way, should end up with a decent score.