I like it!
You have some really good FBF stuff in there, and seom fo it looked pretty neat. The only reason i docked you any point was because it had no music or sound fx.
I think if only it had a little music and sound, this thing would be awsome.
You definately have talent, we saw that in the Smoking Kills Collab too, if you just apply yourself to bigger projects, you could have some really great work.
PS. I love the thrusting dude that was just always kinda there. Haha