nice one
that was a pretty cool animation. the character in this one was pretty cool and original, nice graphics, a nice plot to it and it was very nice for a first animation as well.
Author Comments
Hello everyone, great to be here. This is my very first animation so be fair blah blah.
Mecho man is a comic super hero I created some years ago who I have created 3 comics for. I then however discovered flash so I've remade the beginning of part 1.
I actually made this mid way through last year so don't worry people I have improved alot since then =P
Sorry, I know it's a fairly big file size but I promise I'll learn to compress it properly before my next movie.
enjoy.
A tad bit Slow
Everthing could use improvement, and its so %^@($^%^slow wouldn't know how anoying!
Yours,
SethShock
Could use a few things.
But you already know this from reading the previous reviews. So just listen to their advice and you will have a front page submission on your hands.
nice one
i agree with the last guy
work on better lip syncing and put some voice in
cant wait for the 2nd one =]
Very Good
The conversation was a bit klunky without voice actors. Try to get voice actors and more sound effects in the next one. The background music fit with the events, but you need some ssound fx and voices to go over it. The graphics were very good. More action would be good in the next one.
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3.15 / 5.00
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