hmm...
it was a little choppy.. and next time add some music
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Its a small but good flash i did,
I took the animations .gif and put them in flash
These arent mine though, they are a friends
Thats why they are so funny xDD
ill be having more soon, so
PS
This is not animated in flash, thats why its kinda poor
good for pivot
i use pivot. not really much u can do to fix this video using that. However, u really could add a bunch of sound effects. it ran really smoothly, but the skate...park...thingy was a little rough. paricullarly the loop.
pretty good, but try a lil more better
that was a pretty good animation. i liked the dinosaur one and the skate one a lot. basically i thought it was gonna be total crap at first but i liked it.
graphics: im not saying that stix cant have good graphics but overall the actual stick's look was kinda lame (especially in the lawn mower movie)
style: im not really that big on style in funny movies like these but in the skate movie it coulda been less jumpy (everything was ALL over the place)
sound: well there was only like, what, 1 sound?
violence: self-explanaory ppl gettin killed, lawnmowers runnin ppl over, what's not to love?
interactivity: givin u a good score on this cuz it was a movie and it had buttons and what not
humor: last but not least it was pretty funny in some parts, i'll leave it at that.
overall good job man, i used to work on pivot and i was insane on it lol. well anyway, i think that if u took some time and tried workin on flash wit stix for a lil bit you'd be really good. peace
Not great...
...yeah, Pivot isn't exactly "new technology", and those GIFs still need some work. The first one was by far the best of the three, but even it needed some work. It wasn't very fluid; the action was slow and there were some stalls in it because it was kind of choppy.
But as long as your friend can improve upon these things, I won't flame you guys or downvote you. Keep it up, kid. You'll need the practice.
noiceness!
ok here the break down of my scoring!
graphics:..well..its stickfigures...
stlye:well pulled it off so damn well!
sound:chop suey was in the first one!it was digitized but still its chop suey!
violence:the second one put this over the top!
interactivity:..this doesnt need explaining!
humor:i laughed quite a bit during the third!
keep it up! i see good things in your future!
