kinda cool in a surreal way

The character designs were pretty odd...

I liked the way Duane looked, with the lineless style. The duckbill on the older guy was a bit odd.

Decent voice acting, though some noise on the recording.

The arms of the older guy could've been drawn a bit better and his legs, body and the view from the back to show him bending over were rather poor.

How was it all being recorded? That was a bit incomprehensible.

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It was kinda cool in a surreal way. The insult in the credits was unneeded though.

I'm confused.

The graphics were nice, then terrible, then ok, then back to good. the voice acting was all-in-all good, same as most of the flash, but you got lazy at bits and made it worse.

It was quite funny, but abit corny. there was lots to be fixed up about it, maybe in your next one you will get a higher score.
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Ok animation

This was an ok animation. The graphics sould have been improved by quite a lot but seeing as it is your first submission, its ok and I know you will probably get much better in the future and so I can't wait to see your next animation. The storyline was ok and so were the sound effects. Overall it was an ok animation which could be improved.

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K

^^Good Points^^
I actually thought that this was a pretty good movie. The storyline was pretty good, and your characters were well acted and had some personality to them. There was a good amount of humor in this, which I found quite enjoyable.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics really bring this down. You should use more subtle gradients and just work on the drawings to make them more realistic and detailed.

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Meh...

It's okay for a start I guess but come on man. I know you can do better then that. Keep trying. I know you can do it! Your somewhat on the right track just keep at it!