A bit quick.
The first thing that jumps out at me, that is an improvement is the background and text. This time the text is clear and readable enough to make an impact on the story. The video is highlighted well with the background and it's a very nice job. But it's still basically the same story, again you need definate characters with names, places and such and an actual story. Why does thatr thing eat the person, where did they find the board? All these things need to be answeard to be considered a good claymation. Below average.