This is my first claymation movie,and I thought It might get a decent score(about 2.00).I certainly will continue with the series if this doesn't get blammed.
Also,this is a silent animation.
I am very open to suggestions on what I should do next. If I use your idea(s) you will be credited for sure.
Well its simple.
This submission is your generic claymation first try submission. Despite this its not bad, although I dont have sound I can see why this wouldent do well with the sound. Maybe add more then one color for the claymation? Some definate characters wouldent be bad ether. As well as an actual story, maybe these two guys are fighting over a car or somthing. Something that would keep the viewers intreasted. Anyway, not a bad submission, but again, it needs to be fleshed out more.
Okay I'm biased...
...I love claymation and other stop frame type animations. For a first attempt this was really good. As everyone else seems to be saying, add some sound next time and you've definately got a winner on your hands :)
Not bad.
Not bad for your first try. Like the poster before me said, try adding sound next time. Otherwise, not bad at all.
Interesting
I liked this. I would suggest you add sound, and change the colour of the subtitles to something that shows up a little clearer against that background. Other than that, nice job, and I look forward to the next one.
animation was alrite.
i'd say it was good for a first animation because it was pretty smooth, but....... you realy do need sound. Also try to make your movie have a point or atleast some kind of charecter conflict. i saw your hand in the scene a few times. The background shook a little,. and the floor shook a lot. definetely tape them down good. oh yeah white is not a good color for an animation floor, because you can see where the clay stained it. good luck, and remember make it have some kind of point. if you ever need help with anything just pm me.