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This is "decent"
But like everyone else says most of the flash is not colored. :(
Also I noticed that this dosent really make any sense at times!
What i did like was the parts that have a slight 3-D element.

Make the finished product before you submit.

The graphics of this flash were quite crude, and many times not colored in. Also, the plotline itself seems incomplete. You should have finished the animation in all of the scenes and made a decent ending (with credit roll) before sending this in.

Good if improved upon.

I got lost a couple of times, and not JUST because I'm retarded =P. Try next time not making your fade outs go blank, even if you hae to put some filler in there, because I thought you might be going to a different topic or somethin, anyway, least you're submittin and I'm not so I can't talk much, but keep at it lol.

The music is seriously messed up.

Ok, you absoloutley MUST fix the music. It plays before the movie starts, and when the movie is over and goes back to the preloader, it still keeps playing. You need to put a stop command in there dude. Anyway, it was weird and it looked like you did a lot of frame by frame so ok, I passed it. Good job. 3/5

It rolled very smoothly

It was donr smoothly and rolled well, I wont blam it but it just dosent make any sense