Not bad

The story was what the points are for but the sound was ummm not good but fix that and the drawings and you'll be an1

Nice

Thas was a very nice story. You need more flash skills but you have the ability to make a good story. Keep it up you look like you have alot of room to grow.

Wow

I thought it was preety cool expesaly the music =) anyways keep it up i liked it

Okay that was just f-ed up

Took forever to load and the music sucked so did the animation

wow thanks man you made my day

i really loved it because its kinda my life well im a girl so its diferent and its really like a normal teenage life school and study and more school its kinda hard havong some one special in your life and when you do you make the most stupid actions you would do in all your life but hey thats love

anyway a really loved it maybe you can make it a series

thank you