not bad
wasnt bad, audio crackled a little bit but other than that it was nicely done. and theres several tutorials that teach you how to make a pre loader.
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WAIT for the movie to load before you press play/pause.
I don't know enough actionscript yet to make a proper loader.
I got an assignment for animation-class to make a short video of 30 seconds or so after a few weeks.
So this is what I came up with. A short music video to just the chorus of Snoop Dogg's "Vato"
I don't really expect this to get through the portal, I really just hope to get some constructive criticism to help me out in the future! Thanks for your comments!
it was okay.
Better work on that actionscript though... we got plenty of tutorials tohelp you with that.
Chetic responds:
Yeah, I'll get to that.
Didn't want to focus all my time on learning the syntax when I had a movie to make.
meh
it was just funny cuz they all looked white lol.......
i 5'd just cuz it had b-real in it
ima big cypress hill fan
but the animation was very crappy.... stickmen just don't do it for me
try making some better looking characters....and use thinner lines on the backgrounds... and it was way too short(but like you said you only needed a 30 second clip for class so you're forgiven)... i'm guessing your just starting in animation thou.... so just keep at it... you'll get better with time and practice
oh and BTW you can downloader a preloader on here from newgrounds.... there is a little link below the submission link ..... or you could just google up a preloader tutorial or something
Chetic responds:
Yeah I don't really like doing stickmen either.
Thanks for the preloader tip and review! :D
a nice attemp
this flash is a fairly good movie, i'd recommend it
Decent first try.
Pretty good, original if not anything else. The highlight of this flash would have to be the way you dubed the song over the flash, and not counting humor, the "low" point would have to be the graphics, but hey, you said it your self; you didn't expect it to get through (I've seen worse). Personaly I would have made snoop BLACK but you know...