"For your first"
Pretty good for your first game, if you could change it so that you didnt die in one shot it would only make it better, i understand this is your first game though so great job :)
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kill the terrorists using arrows to move and space to shoot while avoiding enemy fire in my first game ever!!
**known bug** everytime you die and restart the enemy will start shooting more (if you know how to fix that lemme know)
know fix... refresh the page which the flash is on
JakeySnakey responds:
I wish ... but thanks for the review... I actually wanted to do that but that was alot more coding n stuff which i don't know anything about =(
rofl
that was awesome.... that game should be on PS3 or 360 or something omg it was awesome..... I want to have your babies!!!!
oh and btw you're real cute send me a pm sometime ;)
JakeySnakey responds:
You again.... rofl
Its your first
Good luck in the future. Remember the whole point of putting things on this site is for testing and review by your peers.
If you dont like what they say, replying with eat a di** and calling them sandn******isnt going to magically make them like it.
Encourage reviewers to post their thoughts so you can make your stuff better.
Anyway-
Graphics were low quality, its basically a side scroller with not much else to speak of.
Its buggy, needs some more depth, and refined mechanics where the shots are concerned.
Perhaps a menu in the beginning, some powerups or a way to upgrade weapons would help.
All in all...its your first you say....and its not bad for a first time game. I have seen much much worse and think you could make something pretty cool eventually.
The side scroller was a bit over done, but your concept of a soldier side scroller was kind of unique. I thought.
Instead of rag tag you could give it a name associating it with the middle east wars. That would negate any problems people have with the rascist thing.
Just some suggestions. Good luck.
btw---No sound here at work, so you get a 10 there, lol.
JakeySnakey responds:
I don't care if anybody thinks it's racist. I don't find anything wrong with calling terrorists ragheads. N'If it does happen to offend some terrorist, who fuckin cares? And I know the game actually kinda sucks.... sure i wish i knew how to make powerups and maybe levels and different enemies and stuff but ah well... I uploaded what I had done and who knows maybe one person out there will like it.
Hmm...
I'm disappointed.
I hope you know the term 'raghead' is extremely offensive to that culture.
The game was basic and needed to be cleaned up. There was a bug, also. Some bullets just passed through the enemy.
Also, although not to do with the game, your attitude and the way you talked to the previous reviewer in your response and uncalled for, with yet another racist term.
Keep trying, though.
You seem to have some outlines for potentially good games/flashes. You just need to take time over them.
JakeySnakey responds:
To what culture? The terrorism culture? Honestly I don't care if any terrorists are offended.... and sure my attitude is fucking horrible.... especially towards people that accuse me of being racist and a thief.... so IMO I think it was totally called for with yet another racist term. ah well about the game.... yah it could use some cleaning/deletion w/e i think it sucks.... so until I get some huge text book on action scripting I probably won't be making another game and just stick to my animations
eum
this game is already on the site? so eum? i dont het it did you repost it?
and nothing is changed... didn't like to play it...
add powerups? hp? somethings that make it more intersting
JakeySnakey responds:
spell better so i know what you're tryin to say
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