So was it supposed to be a point and click adventure? I'm not sure, the controls were never listed, and I have no idea what's going on.

What is that character design, it's horrifying. It's like a man dumpling, and I'm not talking sumo wrestler type.

So much happens at once, I don't know where the story was going, I get you were 14, but at 14 I had the common sense not to post this.

On top of that the story ends on a cliffhanger...

What. The. Fuck.

^^Good Points^^
Your character designs sure are unique, and the storyline is pretty unique too, and I always give extra points to things for being unique.

^^Needs Improving^^
I couldn't figure out how to start this game via buttons on the game itself, so by pressing play I was able to start. First you are asked to go get flowers, and then you are sidetracked by having to go find this magical meat, and forgetabout the flowers. The whole storyline is fucked up and weird. The continue buttons are hard to hit and overall, this was just an ugly game. It was too easy and didn't make sense at all.

What was that

Seriously, what was that.

That completely freaked me out.

Um...

I'm sorry, but, even given your age, this isn't too good.

The graphics could use a LOT of work.

The 'continue' button needs to actually be a button, not just the text.

Put some sound into it, even if it's just music.

Work on the grammar. The ghost totally lost me while he was talking about the meat.

Put in some sort of an intro as to explain what, in the name of all that is right in the universe, your character's species is!

Sorry about being so harsh, but your age means you'll have longer to develop these things. I, myself, really suck at Flashing, so don't feel bad.

this movie needs work

yeah this movie needs work I think what would help is to blam it.