Interesting stuff
Again, some brilliant humour from SRM who takes things a little too literally at times "Get down here", as he jumps from the first floor of the mall, for example. The setup was great, as was the joke about the living Amish, though you could have had them saying things that sounded particularly quaint and olde-worldy, since that's obviously how they still talk :P
With the way that SRM bounces off concrete floors and punches through the mall ceiling, he must be pretty indestructible, so having Wuggeh save him almost seems redundant, since he'd probably be made more intelligent by a zombie infecting him. I think that there is a great scope for a sequel here, as the Jebs try to escape from the mall and overrun SRM's home town.
I loved the acting of the "lower bufdget" variety, when Cousin Mel says "I'm not dead", followed by "You so is". Monty Python inspired at all?
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