cool one
thta was a pretty nice animation. i think that it could've used some sort of audio in this one, but the drawings in this one really made up for that... they were excellent. the animation itself was also pretty nice as well.
Author Comments
This was a contest to between me and my friend to see who could come up with the better animation in a short week. Which is why it doesn't have sound however I do consider it a completed work, so please don't bash on it for having no sound. This is my very first completed flash and very first submission to Newgrounds please enjoy and tell me what you think. If you enjoyed it please be sure to check out my gallery at deviantart http://youngmav05.deviantart.com/
Good,but needs some work.
The characters were well-drawn,but the movie sorely needed backgrounds in certain scenes. The animation was good,but it could have been better. Like many others,I will say that the movie needed some sound. Also,it would be better if we knew why some event happened,or why.The plot is very important in stories like this. Apart from that,the movie was good and I await the sequel.Keep up the good work.
P.S.:It was my vote that made me the saviour of your movie.
Mavrick-Kalikaw responds:
And For that I do thank you. I also want to thank everyone that enjoyed it. I hope to be refining it soon and when I do I hope to also be including a preview of either part two or just some other work.
Good arts, bad atmosphere
The animation and sketch look arts where great but you seriously need to consider adding sound on your animation otherwise there is no atmosphere in it. Music is a key element in a movie, don't forget it for your next episode.
Good, build from here.
For your first completed flash, I must say good work, especialy compared to other crap that comes through the portal. Keep up work, pump em out and gain experence. Remember, only one way to go, and it's up.
Great but sound would be nice
I can tell that you know what youre doing because you know how to animate really well. keep up the good work. Sound would be nice but if you animate that good you shouldnt need it.