ok

right this is ok, but...
Its is very short, the sounds fairly bad but bearable and the graphics (although good in some places) look like they were unfinished and rushed. You can make a good new version easily with your story lines, but I can see that this will only have a few episodes and then become tedious.

You will want to remake this if you want to get anything higher than a 2/5 -- If you get any higher, then i'll be