This started out as an abstract animation to practise drawing with the mouse, and turned into an actual movie that I ended up partially* finishing. Please tell me what you think, and give helpful critiques even if "its not your style" or whatever the case may be.
*There will be another flash coming sometime before Spring with a bit of a story behind this whole animation, so if you like this then watch out for the final version. :D
wasn't horrible
Not bad not really great. But you kept it short so it wasn't that bad. I saw one thing kind of like this (on the front page I think) but it was like over 2 minutes in length, probably about 5, and by the time it was 1 minute in I had already gotten bored. Only thing wrong with this was there wasn't much point to it. No real plat or story.
The reason it didn't really have a plot is because it was an expression of spring time. I will try to add plot from now on though, even if its a simple one.
Thanks though
y u submit this
dont submit 'just practise'
I'm sorry you feel that way, but your the only one to comment saying that.
This didn't suck.
For something that was just practice this was good. You have some talent. Just don't do the 'stickmen beating the crap out of each other' thing. Damn I'm tired of that. Nice music choice btw.
Thank you very much! I doubt that I will draw stick men just beating eachother senseless anytime soon though. lol
good
liked it alot, style was really good! improve your qraphics and you got a 9 or 10 asured!
I agree that the graphics aren't the best but thanks! ^_^
Pretty Cool
I have to admit that I liked this. Could have been alittle bit longer, but still I think it flowed together nicely
Thanks. The length was a bit short I know, but frame by frame takes soooo long. Especially to a noob without a tablet. lol