WTF!? Very Disappointing.
I agree with IceDragon64. I guess Hairball is suppose to be a third Death Star? The name Hairball is it a spin off of Spaceballs?
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STAR WARS
Episode X “The Sacred Hairball”
The rebels have successfully destroyed the Death Star Mach 3, and have celebrated with cheese and wine. Aside from the festivities, work is still needed to be done.
The Empire has begun work on a new weapon called: ”Hairball.” It has the capacity to destroy the whole universe, going much beyond the previous Death Star Mach 3, which only destroyed galaxys.
Aside from creating a brand new weapon, the empire has luckily found Darth Vader’s rotting brain and implanted it into a new suit.
Thankfully the rebels don’t know about this and it’ll be much more interesting to watch compared to if they would have known.
But beyond the celebration, the newly resurrected Darth Vader has sinister plans to spoil the rebels new intentions...
Please be patient with the beginning... it sets up the movie and makes it much more funnier than not reading it. This movie is unfinished and i plan to take it off newgrounds in a few days. i really appreciate feedback because it's still a work in progress. tell me your likes and dislikes! thank you!
towerdefense responds:
That wasn't what I intended, but maybe that's where I got it from.
Disappointing
Its started good- not great but 3/5 or something. I like SW and some of the graphics were interesting etc. It was a bit funny and I looked forward to what was happening, then it just stopped.
If it were in judgement I would 0 it to help make you finish it properly. Please get on and do so. Please do NOT submit unfinished movies- Toms advice specifically advises you against it
towerdefense responds:
i'm sorry i just wanted to get a lot of opinions out of people... some people want me to keep it up but should i take it off? i've heard what people think now
good idea bad execution?
This could have been so much better,
The beguining, intro text was funny (althogh in acurate as poited out by other) but I was let down soon after.
Just because stick figures were involved does not mean that it could not work but unfortunately, it did'nt .
Simpler more usefull camera angles, could have helped, as well as the movie being finished.
Funny
I was surprised by how funny it was. It has some nice jokes in there. As you mentioned its unfinished, and it ends pretty abruptly. Go on and finish it. Also for Episode XI take time and work on the graphics, to improve it. With great graphics and funny jokes like in this one you will end up getting great scores. With graphics like in this one it might put people off.
I like it!
but it's unfinished... please finish it soon! (maybe with something like a second scene that the pilot puts on the dark side music, and a third time and then darth vader gets bored of it, and wants some thing like this *click* *heavy metal* BOOM! (speakers gone))