I can tell that you put a lot of work into this

And you must take it very seriously. And, while I know that not all of us have English as a native language, the translation errors occasionally make the story impossible to understand. At the very end, with the clam, I had no idea WHAT was going on. I'm guessing that the clam was the bird's son resurrected or something? I don't know. It was very sad at some points, but the viewer needs to know what's going on.

cool one

that was a cute little animation based on the Swallow. i really liked the drawings in this one, they were quite nice, the audio was cool and it had a nice concept to it.
i liked this one, it was pretty cool.

Excellent work.

I adored this submission, my only critique might be to work on the subtitles a bit, given some of the lines have grammar and tense issues, as well as some generalized spelling errors. ie. Swallow.

The piece is wonderful though, it's entries like this that make me come back for more.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!

This was verry nice, it almost made me cry....
Best thing i saw in weeks.

touching

very nice animation style and good story, needs work on the grammar of the subtitles though