U have the same name as I do... lol
Heres some constructive critism:
1. I can understand most of wat the clockguy is saying.
2. most bullets are brass not lead. I just drew my own bulletclock and put it on my userpage.
3.The entry song also took wayyyyyyyyyyyy too long.
4.Watch ur movie at least 5 times over and over again until u liked it and think it deserves to be in the portal. Im still wondering how this didnt get blammed...