not bad

that was an alright test.... but this one definitely need to be longer or have a bigger plot to it.

haha

this is so good.
make with the full length

nice...

good work,this is cool

Nice style

The voices were good.

The ''moving camera'' thing was good.

The drawings were good.

If you make something longer, you could eventually get a front page.

Good luck!

I think...

Well I think your style is pretty good, its not the best not the worst its just in the middle. If you could make it better you might score some extra points with the other people on newgrounds but I think you're doing good