After about 2 weeks of work. It's here. My most time consuming flash. Got a lot out of this one. I really liked making this one, and I think I'm going to ditch Tales of Aloria for a while, (a long long while)because I did'nt like making them and it was too rushed. But I have a music video coming up and im very excited to start working on it. Give me a month or 2. I hope you enjoy this one guys.
I liked it.
It was really a good new style of animation. The way you animated was quick and simple. The backgrounds were nice. The text was short sweet and too the point. The characters were intricate when necessary, and overall it was a fun flash that wasnt a chore to watch. Good job.
Try harder
I was getting quite into it when I saw your characters first off, they were drawn quite well at times. But what really upset me was the way you tried to avoid altering them.
It was easy to tell you tried to avoid all frame by frame work here. Your characters are normally just shown still, not moving and then at any point if there is frame by frame work then its very basic.
If you can find the effort to use all the nice visuals of these characters throughout the animation, you'd be looking at a score much higher than this.
Best of luck.
I immediatly regreted making my characters so detailed, It is so hard to animate them afterwards. I'm still a beginner and was'nt ready to animate such intricate characters. My next flash well take the drawing down a notch, and bring up the animation. Thanks for the criticism.
pretty good for an amateur flash
i really liked the beginning of the flash(though id say speed it up). id say you could make it all in that style. if u did that ud easily get a 3.
btw. that one seen where the grunt is blown up by a gernade, it suspiciously looks like a big black penis cock smacking him in the side of the head.
Ha. Funny you said that. Usually my friends are here when I do my animating, and I was just drawing and not really paying attention. And as we watched it my friends were cracking up. Took me a while to figure out why though. I tried to blur it out, but it looks like you still saw it. Good eyes.
WOW!
This is AMAZING!! I don't say this lightly. Great music match with the mood. The laconic background was perfect, just enough to explain, but not too much so that it blocked out the animation. Keep working on those graphics, and keep up the INCREDIBLE WORK! You could make a series out of this if you wanted to.
It was my intention to make a series, but this was a lot of work for me. I still intend to but now I believe I'll just do some more basic stuff. Thanks for the support!
god it goood
it felt lick i was ther
Wow, thanks for the support.