I thought it was good.
But need more.
it was an alright test.... though i think that some more work could've been done to this one.
Ok, it's a test?
A test of an action scene? Well, ok then. Not sure how to comment since I'm not sure what your intentions were. Tests don't pass. At least they don't when sane users vote.
I guess I could say it looks good, but I'd really need to see more before I can give any useful advice.
Oh and good luck taking over NG. ;)