Everyone likes flashes about prostitutes! Well, here it is, my first real flash.
It's a serious short about a prostitute. I might make sequels to this later, with other protagonists that fall under the description of "Les Enfants Innocents".
Props to Yesaspoon, Arnas and Hockeymonster56 for making some awesome tunes I was able to use. Thanks, guys.
For now, enjoy!
-M
HAHAHAHA Lorania bobit like a mofo
evry time i watch this dude. i rember that lorania bobit laddie that chopped off her husbands weiner and stuck it in a paper bag. then she chucked it in a field. man that was messed. makes yah think once about hookers. and once is all i need. good story thoe i enjoyed it. but animation is a little lax but hell dude i cant wait to see the next one!
Hahaha, awesome, it's great to see everyone's linking the flash to that story. I hadn't even heard of it before making this flash, but after doing some reading (wikipedia is god) I know what you're all on about. Thanks for the criticism and the review, I'll put it to good use!
-M
okay!
Well it wasn't bad for a one of your first tries, the art is a little messy and could probably stand a little more attention, but at least you have a hand on the basics. Kudos for having something of a plot going, but it was short and random for not having a story behind it. The panning was nice. You might wanna work on making your animation smoother. Try a few tutorials, I know there are many good ones here on newgrounds, espically for things like backgrounds and effects like rain.
Yeah, I agree on the animation, I need to smooth that out a lot more. The basics are there indeed, I'll just have to increase le skill. Thanks for your criticism!
-M
OK WTF?
The story was too short. The sound was horrible. There's no emotions and no direction at all. Back to the drawing board for you...
Good start
It's pretty good for a first attempt. The graphics could use work and i would really like to hear some dialog, most people get bored without it. Just facts ya' know? Between the rain and the music i didn't know what to have my volume at. you need to figure out a median between them so one doesn't blow my speakers while i try to hear the music lol. Overall i liked it but you need to work on your proportions with the human anatomy if you are going to do serious flash. I gave a two for humor because i laughed thinking about the case were the guy was cheating on his wife and she did the same thing and threw it out the window while driving. Yea.... but i gave it a decent number since it was a really good start. I can't do anything in flash lol (note: No Submissions) Keep up the work and up your skills and you should go far. I'll watch for more of your stuff.
Hehe, thanks a lot for the constructive criticism. Yeah, I definitely need to work on the sound, it never turns out the way I want it to. You're also right about proportions, but I animated this frame by frame mostly and only used the brush-tool in combi with my mouse. I'm glad you enjoyed it, especially because of the cheating guy story.
Thank you!
-M
