Pretty good.
You improved from last time. You should really work on the colours and shading, though. Can't wait to see the reworked characters.
Author Comments
Inspired by several action-packed flash movies and anime openings, I decided to try making something similar myself. This animation is the result of that decision.
Basically, it simply shows off some heroes and villains of the Simeon universe, a series that I actually invented when I was in the fourth grade. I've fine-tuned and improved the idea for many years.
Although it took a few weeks, I had a plenty of fun doing this. But I'd still be glad if even one of you viewers would also recognise the effort I've put in here.
The music in the background is 'Polar 240', made by ParagonX9.
All reviews will be read multiple times and quite possibly even answered to.
That's all for now, I guess.
Please enjoy.
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i didn't quite understand your premise...but it looked good so ya got points
Salone responds:
Thanks for the points, then.
odd . . .
I liked it. The graphics were smooth. A little confused by the whole thing.
Very unique.
Salone responds:
Well, at least 'smooth' and 'unique' were things that I aimed for intentionally.
Thanks for writing a review.
Good job!
Graphics : It looked very clean... thats great! The characters hands sorta small though.
Style : I like this "Adventurous" theme
Sound : same thing with 00-RV-00, the music at the end seems a little off.... otherwise it would be perfect.
Violence : Sorta violent... and the shield-like weapon? Thats pretty new to me....
Interactivity : You have a play/again button...
Humor : None at all really.
Overall : Its a great animation. It seems like an introduction to an anime series(thats a good thing). Perhaps this will even lead into something bigger or better...
Salone responds:
Honestly, it's reviews like this that make the animating totally worth of my time.
For information about the music being out of sync, see my response to 00-RV-00's review.
And yes, the round, grey objects are shields. The main character wields two. Unique weapons are badass, don't you agree?
Anyway, I'm glad you liked the animation. There will most definitely be more, sooner or later.
That was a nice animation...
It really was, and its obvious that you did make an effort when you were making this, however there was some flaws in it. I dont know if it was my computer but the animation was laggy sometimes, you might want to check that out,and ind the last scene there was no music, again, maybe its my crappy computer`s fault, but it would be nice if you check that out.
Anyway, it was a nice animation and above the average in the portal.
Salone responds:
Let's see here. The animation was fine when I tested it before submitting. However, since the music in the background is not streamed because of the low FPS, there is a good chance that it'll go off sync, depending of the viewer's computer's quality. The animation does have a plenty of lagging, but how much, that also depends of the computer. So, in other words, only good computers can show the animation correctly. I'm sorry about that, it wasn't really meant to be like this.
Thanks for pointing out the problem. Hopefully I'll learn something from this.
